Linked by David Adams on Thu 30th Jun 2011 15:40 UTC
Original OSNews Interviews OSNews interviews Alexander Tsolkas, security consultant, Director Sales & Marketing at Iπsec Ltd. Germany, and creator of HSS, or High Security Server, a highly secure Linux kernel and a proprietary management Control Panel. We ask him about his product and about the state of ultra high security computing.
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RE[7]: Marketing?
by Doc Pain on Sat 2nd Jul 2011 11:16 UTC in reply to "RE[6]: Marketing?"
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I have not find typos on pages 5 to 7 but some format problems in deed.

Example on page 5: 1.1 item 2 missing comma after "werden"; item 4 "d.h." missing non-variable space; item 5 supoerflous comma before "etc"; item 12 "dass" (conjunction daß) instead of "das" (article) required; footnote 1 exact opposite error.

Same page, 1.2 "sogenannten" unword according to newspeak, has to be "so genannten" now.

Superflous and missing commas, also missing hyphen in compound nouns. Also the typesetting is very bad on this page.

Those are of course not all errors on this page, there are more. I just picked those as an example to illustrate that they are definitely there. Proper proofreading will bring up many others.

Examples on page 7 contain typesetting again, there are massive "holes" in the text because of missing hyphenation. Also watch the commas.

Thanks, yes, will consider it. We are just in the start-up phase for marketing now, and I like contructive criticism. I will go through it again, when writing the English version.

Good idea, and honestly good luck, as properly reviewing and correcting the errors in content and form (which have to match each other if one wants a document to be taken seriously) are very important. And the project is worth it.

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