Linked by David Adams on Mon 5th Mar 2012 22:40 UTC
Apple "Apple's iOS is starting to get a little long in the tooth. There, I said it. The overall look and feel of the operating system has not changed since its 2007 debut. Sure, Apple has piled in plenty of new features, but the core of the operating system is the same as it was five years ago. It needs a refresh. I'm not saying iOS is ugly or anything, but it's starting to look a little old."
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RE: Slightly dodgy summary...
by David on Tue 6th Mar 2012 17:16 UTC in reply to "Slightly dodgy summary..."
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Sorry to confuse, but our convention for the right column, "page 2" articles is to excerpt them, usually their first paragraph.

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steve_s Member since:

David, I hadn't quite understood that this was convention for the right column, but I do think that you may need to modify your convention just a little to clear up the obvious ambiguities that can arise.

In this case the chosen paragraph was particularly problematic since it uses the first person, specifically in the sentence "There, I said it". Since there was no visible identification as to the source of the paragraph it really looks like the it's your opinion being presented.

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